That's very promising, I wish there was more, especially the sasusaku part! They are just so good together, you build the tension pretty well
I enjoyed the naruhina part too!:))

Nice
Plzzzzzz update

Amazing. I read this on some wordpress blog, and just knew I had to fine the origins. The sexual frustration of SasuSaku (Despite me not liking it) was as sensual and canon as the dominance in NaruHina (I do kinda like this), which shows how well this was written. This feels unfinished, but in a good way- it is unfinished in the fact that we yearn for more in desperation to the point of full obedience and self degradation, like how the two female victims, especially Sakura, was written in this fanfic. I am sure to read your other fics, and this eill definitely be in my top 5, if not top 1 lemon fanfic of Naruto, and even in general. Amazing.

Please update though I’m not sure if I like Karin in this...wonder how they will fall in love and I hope the girls fight back...maybe that’s how the boys will start to be intrigued?

...I need moar.

Are you going to finish this?

I think an update is necessary hehe

Loved This Story Can't Wait Till You Update

Update

what? poor sakura and hinata

aww please update thisss!

update this pls

I like the premise of this fan fiction, but uh, serial rape and kidnappings and sexual assault? Also emotional and mental abuse?

I like where this is going. GIVE ME MORE! Why has this not been updated YET?!

harsh . . make them regret what they've done . . hinata and sakura would realize yhat naruto and sasuke is using them and u know they'll go hiding and hinata and sakura get pregnant and maybe after a couple year they'll met again and i dont know . . its up to you . . please continue. . or update soon . .