Reviews for Alpha and Omega Book 2: The Fallen
Cyberbook chapter 16 . 3/19
Damnit, this hasn't been update in 4 years after ending in such a cliffhanger!
Guest chapter 16 . 1/2
With broken bow what if Armani had somehow escaped apollo when the first war was going on, found out about his heritage and confused and hurt joined kronos and Luke's army. What ifs...they keep me up at night
Guest chapter 16 . 12/15/2019
Have you just stopped writing cause your so good! Please UPDATE! Also could you maybe do something broken bow related like a one shot of stories of apollo and Armani cause I've always loved there relationship
Dasgun chapter 1 . 8/25/2019
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SoaringEagle13 chapter 16 . 1/2/2019
This has been a good read. Though, seeing as the last update was in 2016 and now that it's 2019, I'm wondering if this is now another dead fic or if it's merely dormant. At this point, even an Author's Note chapter would be reassuring.
Dracco chapter 16 . 10/30/2018
MOAR! Where’s the last capter? ;P
PEJP BengtZone V2 chapter 9 . 2/21/2018
I take it that you have no plans on following the example of Pacific Rim and have the EVA-01 upgraded in the aspect where Shinji-2 will have Rei for his Co-Pilot while inside the EVA, huh?

Shinji-1's 'Harmonic Resonance' seemed almost Telepathic in nature.
I was almost expecting that you would have made the process be performed through physical contact in a manner where it was like a mixture between Psychometry and Technopathy.
PEJP BengtZone V2 chapter 6 . 2/18/2018
Part of me was kind of expecting Risuko to go 'Arbitrary Skepticist' on them in regards to Telekinesis.
PEJP BengtZone V2 chapter 5 . 2/17/2018
I would not have minded "seeing" Shinji-2 and perhaps even Asuka, Rei, Ritsuko, and Misato be, one-by-one, going through the Mind Meld process by the courtesy of Aria, allowing them to experience Shinji-1's memories of the timeline he came from.

Oh, and FemDom is neither amusing nor is it True Feminism.
soggy noodle chapter 3 . 1/15/2018
Well, that happened.

You really know how to write tension and action, I'll give you that.

Though, I am curious as to why Shinji chose thermal rounds if he knew it would make the pistol overheat more frequently - wasn't his go-to option in the last book cryo rounds?

I mean, if you're trying to nerf him by basically giving him limited ammo, I get it... I don't like it, but I get it, but an explanation (internal monologue of his rationale) would've been nice.
Alex chapter 16 . 1/11/2018
Brilliant fanfiction you've made here. Lots of fun. :)
ThePhenakism chapter 16 . 11/12/2017
Absolutely amazing stories ! Finished book 1 and couldn’t stop reading, I wish you had continued writing this but it looks like It’s stopped getting updates :(
Biblio388 chapter 16 . 8/24/2017
Lots of build-up and some very confusing events lead up to this. I haven't seen anything of the newer Evangelion series, so lots of confusing stuff is happening in this entry. Doesn't make it bad though, just kind of learning as I go along. I can say that Alpha and Omega has the best Shinji I have ever read of, hands down. Just like the way you have handled things with big Shinji. Hope to see the next chapter.
Biblio388 chapter 5 . 8/20/2017
Someone just tripped a claymore and doesn't know it yet~. Can't help but look forward to the blast.
Biblio388 chapter 4 . 8/20/2017
I like the way you handled this one. A lot of stuff had to get done to set a groundwork and you worked out a way to do that. It was very interesting reading. Can't wait to see where you go next.
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