Reviews for Cobalt
PurpleNinja07 chapter 21 . 5/10
Just wanted to say that I absolutely love this story. The characters are really well written, and the plot meshes together with both the romance and the drama. And god, that cliffhanger! I know it's been a while since the last update, but please consider continuing! It's actually really rare nowadays that I find good rivalshipping fanfic on the platform (or maybe I'm just not looking hard enough y w y).
Inactiveaha chapter 21 . 9/30/2018
AHhh I need more oh my god! I have to know what’ll happen next
spiritatlas chapter 21 . 3/19/2018
I know it's been more than 2 years since you last updated but I really love this story and I'm so emotionally invested (especially with that cliffhanger!) that I'd love to read what you have planned for the ending. Whether or not you plan on posting the ending, thank you so much for posting what you have! It's been fun to read!
Newskoolnatty chapter 21 . 4/14/2017
this is amazing. Rivalshipping is my otp and i love love love how youve developed it. the pacing of the plot and the relationship is perfect and you really make me want to just give chazz a hug. Im normally not a fan of really OOC characters but the way you've done Syrus and Zane actually blends really well with the rest of the plot. All the other characters are very well written. I'm especially impressed with your use of descriptive detail and how well you can describe more dynamic scenes at a perfect pace so i actually feel as if the story is happening in real time. Jaden and Chazz make such a cute couple and i wanna know what's gonna happen next in their relationship after the latest chapter! I cannot wait to read more and I'd feel empty inside if this was never completed because I'm really hooked! Just please let Chazz be happy at the end he deserves it!
bro chapter 21 . 1/8/2016
AHHH MAN THAT CLIFFHANGER
oo boy i cant wait for the next chapter, i wonder how Chazz's brothers are going to react to this
NicoleBL chapter 21 . 1/8/2016
OH God, it's over! Wow.. the last part was terrifying, are they going to beat him up again in front of everyone?! For a min I thought Chazz is actually winning! Then he just loses so suddenly, and easily after getting his brothers' hopes up.. gosh, and losing with this blue obelisk uniform just made it worse, I hope he won't hate Jaden after this, or feels betrayed or anything, my poor Chazzy T.T! You took some time to update but you surely made up for it, the chapter was AWESOME! The feels and everything, and is it me or your writing style is really improving too? I can't wait to see what happens next! ;.; Well done witg this one!
Nekoyasha12 chapter 20 . 8/29/2015
Omg! that was awesome! x3
It'd be wicked awesome is Jaden did a bit of both. Try to win but when an oppertunity was precented and didn't looked staged give Chazz a shot in. But all in all have Jaden's finally attack that looks like it would end the duel ACTUALLY edn it in a drew! That way nither wins nor loses and Slade and Jagger can't do squat cause it was an all out fair and live duel. Chazz could(towards the end of it cause obveiously he'll be getting fearful/axioous/worried when Jaden shows he's only going to just lay down and take it (XD yes I went there! x3)) realize that Jaden helped him understand (through there duel) that he loves Chazz no matter what and that if he wanted to be succesful he needed to grow a backbone and stand up for himself doing it his way and his way alone. Thus He could even do back to being a Blue but still living in the Red dorm(like Syrus did in the series when he got promoted to Yellow and even Blue at some point)

Wicked awesome story you got going hun! Can't wwait to read more. x3
TheSlackerestSlifer chapter 20 . 8/25/2015
Damn damn damn that's quite the pickle! I can't quite say I'd know what to do either. I probably would be a little upset my significant other would expect me to compromise my own honor, but I mean at the same time the circumstances aren't exactly ordinary. Poor Jaden.
Ok also wtf was his random inner dialogue about the sheets like I was laughing confused laughter at the rant that came out of nowhere XD like I can see you writing that and then just deliberately leaving it like "Nah Jaden would think this."
But yeah everything aside, only thing to say about this chapter is:

I like it.
AmethystUnarmed chapter 17 . 8/8/2015
Slate and Jagger should just take Syrus. They deserve each other
AmethystUnarmed chapter 11 . 8/8/2015
They are too damn cute
AmethystUnarmed chapter 2 . 8/8/2015
Oh no.
AmethystUnarmed chapter 1 . 8/8/2015
Aw Chazz!
Dark Mage Girl Xion chapter 20 . 8/3/2015
Wow. I don't know what lead me to come back to and read some Yu-Gi-Oh GX fics, but I am so glad I did just to read this story. Its absolutely incredible. I adore Chazz so much. I'll definitely continue to read this, I can't wait for more.
NicoleBL chapter 20 . 7/26/2015
I love the chap! Finally, they made up :D Or, almost made up? Whatever, I was waiting for it that I even wondered if they're ever going to go back being friends. For the first time in this fic, I actually liked Syrus! I thought you'd make a chapter were Jaden is going to contemplate his choices, I'm glad you made him doing it with Sy! Oh and, Atticus' big-brother instincts is sweet xD Well done with the chap! Can't wait for the big duel ** .. ah, I hope Jaden won't let Chazz win, it'll be hard but it's for the best, really, esp for Chazz's future, and theirs as a couple too! Anyway, looking forward the next update :)
Miz Maples chapter 19 . 7/21/2015
Loved the cuddle scene. It sent large amounts of warm fuzzies to my ice cold heart. Great story; we need more Rivalshipping.
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