This is great! Please update soon :). Bye!

Did you abandon this book? I’m curious because it has an interesting start and I would dislike for such a book fun of potential to die. But it is your choice entirely and I wouldn’t judge if u dropped this.

This is pretty interesting! I cant wait for the next chapter!

that is so interesting idea, and i like it very much ! Please, uptade

Is it just me or Gin feels sort of like a Mary Sue? But whatever I'm readin it cuz i aint got nothin to live for

It's a good effort but... Gintoki doesn't sound like Gintoki eh :/ i agree with the other guest's critique

Hope to see more xD

nice story

two words: update soon.

oh, and can you add gintoki's idiotic personality? it'd be hilarious.

This is quite an interesting story, but it'd be great if you could find a beta, ahahahahah Someone to check over characterisation and help you with grammar and spelling. Either way, well done with beginning it so far!

Amazing story. I hope you won't drop it.

hi i'm new i love the way that Takasugi and Katsura was so overprotective of gin-chan
aahhh i wish there is more female gin-chan story

Amazing so far I'm loving this cute little Gin-chan! And I love how Gin instantly calls Hijikata Mayo-freak (kinda) as soon as he meets him. Haha, must be instinct from the canon Gintama episodes. XD

Gin-chan is so cute! She should definitely go see Mistuba and bake her a delicious strawberry cake.

Kinda wondering if Sakamoto is gonna pop in, that guy is just too funny. Maybe in the next chapter Kagura and Shinpachi will make their debut?

Looking forward to more, Lina.

OMG I DIDNT EXPECT MITSUBA WOULD BE INVOLVED AND SHE IS SO SWEET HAHA KILL ME i like the way you wrote characters this story is going great