Amazing story

Deeks save Sam and callen life on ncis and lapd case kensi is badly hurt and the detective ask if he could sit with her in the hospital even though he doesn't know them or kensi

6 hours I spotted this title and the brief intro that went with it, and now that I have finished it...WOW! Awesome, tears of horror, tears of joy, and tears of laughter because of how well you put the two of them in words, allowing me to actually hear them in my head as if I were watching them on the screen. Let us hope that they get a similar happy ending on the show! Great job!

Thought the story was really good but I got sick of all the notes pretty quickly.

So I’m not sure you’ll even get this seeing how this story is 4 years old. But I just had to say that it was absolutely a pleasure to read. Some of those chapters were so well done and creative. You should be told when you are good at something and you are a very talented writer. Not sure where life has taken you these past couple years.. but I hope you are still writing. Your words deserve to be heard.

If you don't write professionally , you should !. This has been one of the best structured and written stories I have read on FF. Very well done!

I love how you portray the romance between kensi and deeks. densi for life

You did a fabulous job with this story! It was literally perfect. I liked how you didn't focus on the real physical aspect of their relationship-if you catch my drift. Very, very well done.

Omg this is so amazing I'm loving it already

so this fic took me three days to read...the reason being, i kept having to stop and it off cause of the level of fluff. one of my friends has been on the receiving end of many screaming texts from me as i read this truly amazing, wonderful, incredible fanfic. i have laughing so hard, cried my eyes out far to often, and smiled so brightly my cheeks are hurting. this is seriously in my top ten favorite fics of all time, well done on capturing so many emotions so damn well.

Omg I love love loved it so so much it was so. Ute and every time callen talked to Kensi about how much he loved her I cried I love them so much they were so cute loved how callen was so serious about Kensi being his little sister and how Eric showed his love for her just in a different way than normal people it was so cute I loved everything about it it was adorable romantic loving and everything in between

Wow Just Brilliant!

Wow ! just perfect! so romantic!

Just perfect ! Brilliant

Like it so much