A fab fic! Very sexy and sweet! Hope you post more som stories in the near future, you write really nicely :)

Romantic and sexy...nicely written :)

That was perfect. I wouldn't have changed a thing. Thank you for capturing the true beauty of a moment like this. That was...intriguing, innocent, sexy, beautiful, passionate...everything all at once.

For and easier read you can consider chopping up the rather long segments of text... it get harder to read when it's all mashed together... (hope you understand what I mean)
But aside from that this was a good story...

Lovely, loved it, great work.
:) :)

So romantic! You can really sense the feelings between them!