great story

Simply amazing story telling. I like the flashback in the beginning which hinted at the previous history of Europeans in Africa, it was a nice touch. Overall though, a very well executed and thought out story. I think the decision to have the plot be simple allowed the in depth descriptions of the scenery/traditions/tools and weapons. Very well done. I'm appalled that this piece of writing has so little reviews on it when it is so masterful. Anyway keep the amazing work coming my talented friend!

Very cool story. I have read many AVP stories, but never one like this. This is a truly unique story and I am very proud to say, it's one of my favorites. Your grammar and spelling is perfect and you detail very, very good. The spaces between the lines are perfect and the length of the chapters are also perfect, not too long and not too short. The vocabulary in the last chapter is very good. I was curious as to what some of the words meant. Keep up the godlike work on other stories, and you'll hear from me again :)

Omg ive been away from my computer for too long this was an amazing end...or is it 0_0 anyway amazing story im so glad u didnt kill her i grew attached lol amazing story and i cant wait to read what else u come up with

Totally Amazing story! I was totally transfixed by the story and sat for 2 hours straight reading it! AMAZING! PLEASE WRITE MORE STORIES I LOVE IT!

Okay, final chapter (after the IMHO deviant or perhaps even anomalous previous chapter). Well, you've given me quite a 'ride', I must say.

First of all, as I am also reading your second fanfic, I must say you delight by telling absolutely non-standard stories. They are totally in character but they're absolutely outstanding! I won't tell you what the standard Predator-fic is, as I think you already know. Your stories have (so far) been like a field trip to an unknown area, where every corner allows a new vista and where surprises are followed by new discoveries. That's what I liked best.

Then, your style. Excellent work there, too. Your sentences read like the Japanese Maglev train. You know what, I guess I could ramble on and on, but I won't. I'll just say I truly admire your work.

If you're not already publishing original work, you really ought to. Definitely. Undoubtedly so.

Okay, this took me ages to figure out! It wasn't obvious enough for me this was a flashback. But I got it, now.

Anyway; great story so far but I'll give a full review at the final chapter :-)

Definitely a story worth following. Outstanding work.

Wow gone so long i got two chapters woot! Ever waiting on the next will she get the honorable death or will he lol cant wait to find out!