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I love this version devil part seems to suit sasori keep writing your stories are amazing.

Warning!Alotta of medical terms ahead read at your own caution.
Hmm...Dei must be has paraplegia (paralysis in the legs to lower back) and sensory paralysis (loss of sensation)Meaning he can't feel his legs as stated in the could also have cerebral palsy (congenital disorder of movement,muscle tone if it was cp then it would have to been a birth defect or complications in the womb or birth since cp is not hereditary (hereditary means passed on by the genes) or poor could be a birth defect or complications in the womb (Most likely of the two I would suggest birth defect,if it was by complications of the womb then the mother would have to servely injure herself while pregnant but dei would've probably died in the womb instead.).He could've been born with osteogenesis imperfecta (its a genetic disorder that causes the bones to break from little to no apparent cause).Who knows. Sorry if there are errors English is not my first language and I'm on mobile.

I actually read the DeiSaso version first. I love both of them!

OH YES.
I love this!

Omfg. Awesome and YOU'RE GOOD IN WRITING LEMONS. So now change the rating of the Evil Innocence and write lemons. Lol.

good lemon :DDD

Oh hey, you already posted the sasodei, never mind

Oh, hehe... That was interesting thing XD Though it was really weird reading SasoDei again. I-I really can't imagine uke Deidara anymore. DX But hey, what a surprise, a lemon-lemon from you! Cx
I think I'll always love Sasori as the devil or some kind of demon. Uhuhu, too bad I don't remember the name of this epic fanfic I've read once. DX
Ah, but it's a review for this one, so... GOD, that was one fine one. XD

I love this story! X3 I don't know what to say. it's like everything's perfect! :D The lemon is great too! Sometime around I have to go back and re-read it. X3 I love this so much. *hugs you randomly* Thanks a lot. w

"Shouldn't he have horns or something?"
I know right? XD I bet Sasori doesn't have a lot of people who's scared of him. lol. I mean look at him! He's so cute. (Sometimes.) Hell. Even if he did have horns we still love him. X3
Cause we all love Sassy. Right? :D

I can't wait to see the DeiSaso version. XD
On to read da next version! :D