love this story

that was awesome smiles

This story, this story has left me without words. It is amazing and so well written. Really this is one of the best fanfic's I've ever read! Keep up the good work.
-L :)

Awwww that was beautiful. You even made me like a story that uses the 'you' sense. They usually give me a head ache, but this one was actually very good.

Really enjoyed this! :)

great xxxxx

Amazing!

Is there a prequel with Harry and Carlisle meeting? This was good! Poor Harry. Glad Luna convinced him to change her.

It's definitely interesting reading this from a second person perspective, and I applaud you for writing your story like this. I loved the vision at the end of this chapter, it was beautifully done.

Love it and if it was an actual story I would love it even more! There are not enough HarryXCarlisle stories out there...

Wow, THIS is a very nice story. And i find it original since you're using "you" instead of "I" or "he". I really like Luna too. Well, okay, I always love Luna but yours is just... Aw, I can't even find a word.
Thank for updating this story!
And sorry if there are words not right written, I'm not English and my german (I saw some of your fanfictions are in german) is just horrible. '
Bye bye, see you maybe in one of your stories!

Ahh, one of my fav pairings. Good story. Too bad it was so short.

It's not bad but it's a little on the short side and did you really have to kill so many people off ?

Other than this beef that I have with your story it's ok !

The Crimson Mage.
P.S: Happy Chinese New Year !

Second person writing in very rarely done and usually show a deep relationship (even if one-sided) with the person being written to. If your story explained that relationship I missed it which left the story hanging. Even then, it was well written. Thank you.

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