I don't even need to read the story to see you've got Fumblemort pegged. Regardless of what I've been told about the books, I don't see the old fraud as good but misguided. I see him as truly evil. I see no other explanation for everything he does to Harry. No sane person would endanger the lives of several hundred in a school just to test one. No, he's not even close to sane nor good. Don't even bother with trying to say he's the leader of the light as there's nothing light about the old fraud!

Amazing update soon~

that is good. update soon please.

ok need some evil people. Your story is very different than any others. thank you

Loved wait for more.

This chapter is way too much at once. The info seems to be stuffed down my throat. I just can't follow it all the way through. It shows some really good ideas but with this sort of info about her powers and familiars should probably be seen over a period of years or something. Maybe when she has grown up or as a teenager when learning about them. It just not seem believable that she is learning them at this young of an age. The memories that she would remember would be impressive if she was not at the age of fantasy than if she was.

It is a pretty good story but to me it seems a little to short like a movie made by different directors from to many stories. Their is little to no emotion to this story. I would have also like to have seen some evidence of cruelty from the Dursley's and not just take the child's word especially since I do not know very much about her and why she seems like an adult in the form of a child's body. Though I have to say the concept and idea seems to be very well made and I am a person who prefers original couples.

Hi - I like what you are doing here and ti's a good start. You may want to consider the following:

If I recall correctly, Dumbledore was a beneficent character in the Potter novels. Why make him into a villain here? If you want to do that and I am correct, find a way of more completely explaining his changeover.

Also, Annie leaving home at age four isn't quite plausible; you may want to increase her age a bit so that becomes more believable (say, 10-14).

Keep going!

great chapter i loved it please update soon

interesting cant wait till next chapter

excellent chapter update and i can not wait to read more soon please and thank you

look nice chapter

Love the story. Update soon.

plz write more

excellent first chapter and i can not wait to read more soon please and thank you