I was thrilled to see that you updated! I love the premise of this fic. Good chapter! I'm intrigued about how this will play out. Poor Belle!

By the way, loved chapter 1. You wrote the angels perfectly. I shouldn't have read it before bed!

Argh! This is why I only read complete works! It was going great but clearly you can write more. It can't end there!I hope you continue this. You did a great job keeping them in character.

Okay, one, I don't think this story is complete. Far from it! It's just beginning! Come on! The Doctor hasn't even found out the truth about Storybrooke yet. Two, you need to space out the paragraphs and dialogue. While it was all written well, it's a little annoying when you try to read it like that.

This is so good! You should continue it.

My friend, this story sounds great so far; keep up the excellent writing!
I've only just (well, relatively) gotten in to Doctor Who, but I've loved OUAT for ages. I think your story is going to be one of my favourites!
Anyway, good luck, and update soon.
Love
Stel

The Doctor and Belle I am loved it. Wonder what Rumple will think...