The biggest flaw of this story is length. Too short, but very enjoyable nonetheless.

It was very sweet...

I enjoyed reading this very much. Thank you for your hard work. :)

Beautiful story i loved it thank you

Thank you for this story! Really enjoyed it

Read the whole thing in one sitting. I loved it, especially the ending. It was one of those cases where I was like, yes Naruto going on his first flight, OF COURSE that's how it should end! I didn't really have an ending in mind for this, but then when it happened, it seemed like just the right thing. That to me is how you know it's a good ending, when it feels "right" for the story. I like my HEAs as much as the next guy, but some of them make me facepalm. Like they're written just for the sap, and not because the author still cares about the plot or the story's themes anymore. (If the last chapter had been one big extended sex scene, Naruto's graduation and final flight happening off the page, that would have been one of those "just for the sap" HEAs.)

Cool fic, thanks for sharing!

It's a good storyy and one of a kind! Good job! ;3

Sakura, that stinky hoe .
Lil, nah she isn't the enemy anymore.
Karin is.
That skank.

OH YEAH! Great fanfiction btw! There was lots of emotion, and . . .
That lemon though.
Fantastic smut! You deserve a triple chocolate chip muffin :D
*stuffs face in muffin*
:muffled voice: The plot was well developed, not rushed, ya know? I hate it when people rush stories. Well written, thank you for writing it.

SASUNARU FOR EVER!
*salutes*

Cute

It was a nice ending chapter i liked it a lot

I love how you wrote this. Every word was important and there were no meaningless sentences. I love how there was some complications to Sasuke's and Naruto's relationship - it showed the realistic side of it: they were new to it, they were scared and impulsive and they made mistakes but were willing to fix it because the force between them were too strong to ignore. It was great but DAMN I WANT A SEQUEL. Them happy. Together. Naruto a pilot. And taking Sasuke into the air. Ugh.

What a great story! I was immediately drawn into the plot and fascinated by the futuristic hell on earth that the "haze" created. How awesome was it that global warming created a world where blue skies don't exist? (Not very spectacular for future people, but great for us.) I loved both Naruto's and Sasuke's vulnerability. It was very passionate.
I was kind of disappointed that Sasuke was seme though. It really felt like it was building up to be a NaruSasu lemon, and Naruto did evoke the dominant attitude.
I also wished that this story was many chapters longer. Some things seemed a bit rushed and thrown in there, like Sakura's jealousy and Konohamaru's party.
I'm not exactly sure what "flame" is, but I assure you I loved the story. It immediately compelled me. An extended version is most welcome, and it was a great change from the absolutely pointless, plot lacking garbage that has been appearing all over this site.

Great job!
Nel

I've been waiting for this all week,and I wasn't disappointed. I'm glad theyes figured it out and Naruto never gave up on his dream even though he lost sight of it for a bit there but That's what friends are for I guess to helpy you play hide and seek with your dreams. Anyways I loved this story and I'm glad I got the chance to read it, I hope you can and do write something else just as inspiring ad this and if not don't give up on your dreams.

kai

That was amazing! I absolutely loved the wrap up of the series! Great job. Because of how good that was, I'm thinking of checking out your other works. Keep up the great job!

Noooo! 'Tis the end of the story! (T.T) I'm both happy and sad, lol. This was such a good story and I'm glad everything turned out fine for both of them in the end. I gotta admit to giggling like a fan girl when Sasuke admitted that he wanted to 'complicate things', hehe...I thought that was so cute, lol. And I just melted when they were in his room later and how Sasuke liked them being together. D

Well, I'll really miss this story now that it's finished, but I so look forward to your new stories that I'm sure will be just as good. Thank you again for sharing! -Cris