I LOVE IT! except the Remus snogging a girl part, i dont think he is that type. But I still LOVED IT! Pls do check out a fanfic by me and my friend titled A Life, Time Apart. It is a marauder fic, and I hope u like it.

Lovely story.

This is such a heart warming story and the story was wonderful and lovely! You should write stories like this more.

That was hilarious I loved it, keep writing R

Damn! That was amazing:D Please write something else cause that was lovely:) Really! Sytiusz you little coward, I love you3

Very good. Lily should take them to cinema next,

Very cute

Wow, I really liked this one! I usually don't like fics about the Mauraders, but you really captured their personalities in this one, though I think Sirius would have eventually gotten over the heights thing. You should totally write more, but I'd like to see what you could do with a whole story instead of just a one-shot!

Ah I love the marauders era! I loved it. Siri was terrified of the coster while Remus was living everything! You should write more!