| Reviews for One More Trigger |
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   zigmas chapter 18 . 7/5 That was VERY risky. And a good setup for a VERY dark story, where Coil wins by losing - in the matter of a split-second-too-fast decision. Though it was obvious that you wouldn't do it (what with some 10 more CHAPTERS ahead at the time of me typing this, lol). But I've SEEN stories actually go in such a dark way - so it's GOOD that I wasn't following it on-time. |
| zigmas chapter 2 . 7/5 Nice AU. As are most of yours, lol. |
| WindbornesWord chapter 22 . 6/29 Thought came up, pretty sure the Nine didn’t kill Mouse Protecter until right after Leviathan hit Brockton Bay. So I don’t know whether you want to stick to her being dead or not. Also fairly certain her death wasn’t publicized until after the Nine hit Brockton. |
| H Max Marius chapter 16 . 6/7 Okay... so shouldn't the title of this have been 'Girl Power'? ;) |
| WindbornesWord chapter 29 . 6/3 Good Fic, I’m kind of scared though, Leviathan is coming after all? I think? Though you did seem to skip Bakuda. |
| Corwyn chapter 29 . 5/18 I'm enjoying this story so far, and looking forward to it continuing. Thanks for sharing it with us. |
| RockySES chapter 29 . 5/5 This was really good, can't wait for more! |
| Quelthias chapter 29 . 4/28 What a fanfic! We are all so used to monstrous Emma and Madison. Having her acting responsible for once does change things. For the 9, the first fight was over a bit too quick and I am glad that the 9 got a second kick of the can so to speak. As for the end result, since the 9 are gone... The rest of the villains must be extra scared of reprisal. Coil gone early means no Empire 88 exposure and with no Lung capture, will things be quiet in the bay? I have a feeling the local cape scene will pop into the firestorm it usually is. |
| koseta.a chapter 4 . 4/24 So Emma is Medusa from marvel? And ladybug sound like a child's TV show |
| koseta.a chapter 1 . 4/24 If youre gonna say fuck a lot but censor it out change the fucking rating and type the whole word out. |
| TheWickedTruth89 chapter 29 . 4/18 Great chapter, I can't wait to see more. |
| pepejohn chapter 7 . 4/11 This story is too happy for me at the moment. Can't read it, too sweet in a weird way since canon is a hell on Earth scenario |
| InCK chapter 29 . 4/10 awesome story, cant wait for next chap! |
| Tourfaint chapter 17 . 3/29 Is this an AU without Manton limits? Ballistic can't launch people and I don't think vista can distort masters' minions like they are not organic. |
| Blackberry Avar chapter 29 . 3/28 Satisfying indeed. |
