Really nice one. Didn't expect to like it as much as I did. The ending really nails it with the mood.

I just read a really depressing fanfic and this cheered me up a lot!

Oh myyy!
I can only imagine what would happen during LoLK.

I kept expecting her to say "Man, someone must really want you to beat that bird" Nice short, thank you

Imagine if reimu encountered a foe she couldnt beat because it kept on using a trick that just couldnt be avoided. Or when she thought it was over it would get back up in perfect condition and did it every time shed eventually call it the undying fiend.

Amazing. No other words.

Moral of the story: Heaven and Hell Meltdown is an absolute bitch.

That was really interesting.
I think you should do a sequel, just with more shipping

Yet another magnificent work! I say, you really have a way with the written word. I'm more than a little jealous of that! My own stories are ripe with ideas, but the detail work is rather lacking. I can't describe things to save my life. My forgetful nature doesn't help me with it. Describing little things is my worst subject. I can describe appearances just fine with a little help, but... The little things, I find quite difficult. Like describing an action, as an example. I kinda... just say what happened. And, to be honest, I feel like I'm getting worse at it as time goes on. Anywho, thanks for the great read! I'll look forward to what you write next, for sure. This was an interesting take on the continue system.

That was great. Combination of story telling and game mechanics working together well.

I thought that this would be pure humor and a quick laugh.
It actually got really interesting by halfway through the page.
The conversations between these two seem to come naturally. They synergize well.
...Maybe you could do a sequel?
Or try at shipping them?...

A wonderful interesting read. A good job as always

'nother one? Please? You don't have to stick to the games either.

Heh, I'm trying to imagine how Marisa would be acting about something like this.

This was a fun read. For some reason I always see Reimu and Komachi being a good couple, maybe because of both of their easy going nature, and serious-mode when it's time to do stuff. Couple of friends I mean... though I would like to see them as a pairing. Why not try it yourself? I'd like to see how it works. Anyhow good story and good luck in future stories.