its still gross and all ,but please stop using servant bitch like after every sentence ivy or harley says.

Congratulations. You have made me hate the most awesome super villains. And make me feel like a bad person for letting one of my favorite superheroes (Raven) meeting Harley and Ivy be nice and they might make a wonderful friendship fanfic. I am disturbed ,but impressed of the story and how you came up with it. Well done. I think

Um..not a fan.

Is it okay if I write a sequel to this fanfic? Your story is really awesome and I really like the settings and storyline! Thanks to you I started to like raven a little...

Sorry if I really offended you...If you don't mind I would tell you my plan of the sequel...

Of course they’re bluffing. For a chip to do that it would have to be in their neck and Harley couldn’t put it there with a hammer without killing them also any liquide they would invest just isn’t logical because there’s a different chemical makeup of everything they eat DAMNIT RAVEN

I don't know if you meant to do this but, Zatanna is the Daughter of Zatara who is on the league. His daughter is around the age of Robin I think in young justice. Zatara is a little over protective of Zatanna and it took him a while to let her join The YJ team. Of course I have not read very many of the comics but I also believe Zatara was not a founder... WonderWomen, Superman, plastic man, Aquaman, and Batman were if I remember correctly, the flash and green arrow are some of the main people as plastic man is not included a lot.
Sorry if this sounded rude, I just like learning things. So if there is a comic saying Zatanna is one of the founders I would love to read it. Also, this story is awesome! You're a great writer.

PLEASE do a Sequel

Honestly I love your writings and you better make more stories like this, I love darker stories, with lemons, torture, and love.

Okay, I have narrow it down from rereading the updated version of the story, and it is awesome!

Now, the question remains: will there be a sequel as you mention in the last chapter about a possible sequel hook?

cool story

I cried at the ending...
I've loved every chapter as much as you can when your favourite character is being tortured. Can't wait for your next story, I'm following you all the way :)

Omg this is magnificent you play out the characters personalities personally and I really like how you made raven be poison Ivys past employee omg and the plot is awesome and well written definately favoring and following

Loved your story great last chapter...glad all of her friends are supportive of her...extreamely glad that Ivy is taken care of

Love it, and yes I cried like a baby at the end. It was was touching and it's finally over,I wish the best for raven.

I wonder what ascendant will be about.
loved this story