This is a great story! Looking forward to reading more!

I think I read the start of this one years ago! So glad to see you continuing with it! Don’t leave us hanging another 4 years though :)

Unable to read as is with all the computer "info". Is it possible to repost?

I've just read through your story and find it captivating. You have caught all the characters superbly. Your story has been so easy to read and kept me believing I was reading an episode from the show. The story line is wonderful, though sadly horrific, but hopefully things will change for Marissa and Kelly. Where is that bastard Jonathan Wayne? Gibbs will surely want to kill him. It was so easy to believe that Marissa was Gibbs' Kelly's best friend. I won't let on what I think will happen to them, I'll wait and see what you have in store for us. Can't wait for more.

This is a gut wrenching story. Really do like it. Gibbs in Papa Bear mode is the best. Update when you can.

Now that is a connection at the end!

Is flat out mind boggling stupid part of your plotting device? NCIS is located in the Navy Yard, a VERY SECURE facility. You don't get in there EVER without proper, acceptable, verifiable ID, and you have to actually have business there, so your "mysterious woman collapses in the office" without ID is just so much sloppy writing and crap. Unless she was Naval, and/or military personnel, she would have been turned over IMMEDIATELY to the FBI. NOT NCIS's problem or jurisdiction. So part two of your crappy plot implodes. Either way, if she got in to the Naval Yard and NCIS HQ she had ID and they knew who she was. Ordinarily I might say try again, but on second thought, DON"T, you've wasted enough electrons already.

This is a terrific story! I hope Gibbs and Company nail the bas####s!

Superb story!

Wow found the room Marissa was kept in ... great find Tim

Damn I hope they get the husband

Yippee! Got him!

I am so looking forward to reading the rest of this story!

Kelly's reaction cannot be manufactured. She is terrified of the that man. That is enough evidence there plus Marrissa's medical records from Bethesda to open a huge pile of worms.

Way to go, Gibbs! Can she identify any of the other men that came there?

Really good!