Reviews for Behind Enemy Lines
Malgrath chapter 8 . 10/3/2019
good to see you again
Another S.T.A.L.K.E.R chapter 2 . 4/2/2019
Rain water can be very dirty. The more particles of various sources in the air (such as an urban, large scale warzone) the worse it van be. Always boil your water. Exact same goes for snow\ice, which can be worse at times (greater odds for contaminants and for particulates (dust, dirt, etc).

Melted snow water with some particulates just feels\tastes 'off'. It is still drinkable, and would be much preferable over drinking piss.

'Glacial' purity is a lie.
Guest chapter 8 . 3/31/2019
I'm happy You post again, love the story ;]
Another S.T.A.L.K.E.R chapter 8 . 3/31/2019
Update (so long since last)

Very thankful for this. Not enough tales about the average* guardsman!
246vili chapter 8 . 3/31/2019
Awesome! Good to know this story still lives. Thanks for the update.

Now that the two of them hopefully worked out their differences, maybe they can pull of this mission.

Of course I would not be suprised if something bad is going to happen next chapter. Like the enemy discovering their "HQ" (the office they were hiding in) along with all the equipment they got from the Mechanicus. Now that would suck.

Keep up the good work.
Another S.T.A.L.K.E.R chapter 7 . 7/25/2017
A great story, one I hope you continue soon!
246vili chapter 7 . 4/21/2017
Damn, what a day poor guy had.
Getting nearly caught by the enemy, nearly shredded to pieces by artilery, receiving a hight-importance mission from the Mechanicus (or the Skitarii) and getting the attention of a demon of Nurgle.
At least he got suplies from the Ordo Mechanicus and later will even get new weapons and support.

Thx for updating this great story.
dghornick chapter 6 . 12/6/2016
well, i seem to have found a nice little hidden gem of a story, and perhaps even a good author as well, keep up the stunning work.
246vili chapter 6 . 11/7/2016
A little flashback/dream? At least we get to know how things ended up the way it did.
Anon chapter 5 . 10/3/2016
Great story! Very interested to see where it goes :D
246vili chapter 5 . 10/3/2016
Good chapter.
Uh oh! The "Soilder" is in deeb trouble whe this is over. Either Vicker turn out to be innocent somehow and he'll be court martialed for doing all this to his officer, OR she'll be considered a heretic and he'll be court martialed for sleeping with the enemy.
If he want to get out of this alive, I suppose he have to go all "Sly Marbo" and do something very heroic to be forgiven.

The W40k universe is never too kind to a simple Guardsmen.
246vili chapter 4 . 10/1/2016
Okay, WTH was that? Is a follower of Tzeentch try to use him for a bigger plan?
Commissar Carl chapter 4 . 9/19/2016
I am 99% sure the dude was Tzeech doing his usual JUST AS PLANNED shit because he's a dick
SanShine chapter 3 . 3/7/2016
I love how the Guardsmans identity is left anonamious. Gives the story a 40k edge, because being a man in the grim darkness of the fourty-first millenium means to be one amongst billions others.
Crob75 chapter 1 . 5/28/2015
This is a amazing story. I Cant wait to see the next chapter!
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