WHAT HAPPNED TO RAINBOW

Can I just say that the little shop of horrors style song was the best thing ever. Legit the best thing this is a great fanfic! And you are great! You're like a gummy bear and a puppy all rolled into one! And the gummy bear puppy hybrid is great at writing! Yay!

I enjoyed it. :) The plot is well thought out, the music parodies are nice, and there's CheesePie. w

The only thing you're having trouble with is the sentence length. A lot of the sentences are run-ons and it makes the story sound rushed. Try breaking up the run-ons into shorter sentences, or at least put commas to indicate pauses. Other than that, I liked it. :) 8.5/10

This is the second fanfic I read that kills off Rainbow. The first obviously being cupcakes. Even though I find it sad that RD dies, cupcakes is still my favorite fanfic. (Sorry if I said too much about cupcakes)

I ship this, but I've seen better. (Please don't hate me)

WHAT IS IT?!

This was awesome you made me cry when scoot said she loved rainbow write faster

One. Word. : Daaaaaaannnnnggg. That was... Oh, how would I put it? Pretty intense. But I look forward to reading it.

Let me at 'em, let me at 'em! I'll rip It's soul into pieces! I do like the use of the song, really clever. But still, no one hold me back! I'll slice It it ribbons!

WHY! Why would you do that!? You put in a perfectly good song, they almost kissed! AH! And then you had to bring in that Fluttershy is hurt! NOT cool, but at the same time it's so awesome!

I kno this is a cheese pie fic but if ms cake and cheese samich got together would it be a cheesecake fic

For some reason this reminds me of sonething...*keeps on listening to kiss the girl from the little mermaid* nope

Cheese sandwich is a better colt for pinkie pie then pokey priece

Awwww! Gee thanks that makes me feel much better about myself now that I'm 20% cooler!

it's a changeling.