You should of started with the intro and then get on with the reading.

Thanks for mentioning my stories, I appreciate that!

whatever happened to updating!

I'm waiting! I think you could do a lot with this. :) Only question. No Bast?

A lot of potential just needs some work.

I. Love. It!

If you want more people to read it, you should make it a bit longer. And you really need to fix the grammar. It should be: "Horus, do we have to be here?" Said Bes, unhapily.
"Don't you want to know how the Kanes' described you?" Isis asked. "But-" "No buts. Now, sit down." (you need to tell us who said that.)
"Who else do we need?" asked Thoth. "We're missing Set, Nephthys, Ra and Anubis. answered Isis.
(Or Isis answered. And Ra is in Sunny Acres, sleeping, remember?)
Thoth snapped his fingers and they appeared on the couch. "Finally." Mumbled Bes. "Let's just get this over with." Muttered Set.
"Who wants to go first?" asked Horus. "Me." answered Thoth.
The Red Pyramid.
With those words, everyone glared at Set.
We only have a few hours, so listen carefully.
"Horus, he's going to scare everyone to death!" Nephthys yelled.
If you're hearing this story, you're already in danger.
"Osiris, you'd better talk to your son!" Yelled Isis.
Sadie and I might be your only chance.
"If someone interrupts one more time, I'll reveal a secret of yours." Said Thoth, before someone interrupted.