the paper in James's hand remind me of death note hahaha

the paper in James's hand remind me of death note hahaha

you should so update the story. I quite like how it is going.

please update.

I hope you manage to get back and continue writing this amazing book.

Please update soon

I know it’s been like 4 years since you’ve updated so this is probably dead but I really home you come back someday to this. It’s really interesting and I would like to know what happens next or even just learn about the changes they are going to make.

Oh this is good...is Alice still the godmother...hopefully they will include Alice and Frank in the discussion that way Neville can grow up around the potters since they are each godparents to the others kids...I so hope that Neville and Luna get together...now about the prewitt twins I do so hope that molly doesn't get them I would like for them to get their inheritance not be stolen from them

Great story please continue it soon.

Good story but you have a few mistakes here and there. Using him instead of her and combining words for instance

You talk about fates having enough of their plans getting derailed then turn the protagonist into girls.

At least be honest when you talk out your ass.

Dead?

to be totally honest I am quite upset at that whole thing with her and kakashi since you made her seem like an object to be claimed as 'his' that she has no choice in the matter and that quite frankly makes me want to rage... but I digress ill keep reading to see what happens...

Question! Is there no language barrier? Or maybe did the fates use a sort of spell or something so that they can all understand each other?

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