Great! Id like to read more..

It was good, kinda but still good enough to read!

Gross but I still like it. And I will keep reading your fanfictions.

I...wow, I simply do not have the words. That was absolutely beautiful. That's all. Well...that and thank you.

*claps* Bravo, April! I applaud your sudden realization. Who gives a crap what people think about your decisions? In the end, it's whatever makes YOU happy that matters. I can really relate to this chapter because I went through similar conflicts with myself before i started dating my (no ) fiancé. Because we we're coworkers (not only that, hut he was my MANAGER) I was told from friends and family that I shouldn't go out with him. But I really liked him, so I did what I thought was best. And look at us now. Gonna become husband and wife in three months. 3

I'm really liking how you write April. She's such a vanilla character in the cartoon that it's nice to see her with some personality. lol Keep up the good work!

Damn, I can just picture the dips and curvatures of Donnie's muscles; hard and firm as they flex deliciously with his movements. Yum...

Ahem ... on to the next chapter!

"The interior design effect was like Steampunk and Art Deco had a baby". Such simple line, yet it brought up such beautiful imagery. Nicely done, Jay!

Ooh, now we're getting to the good stuff. I can already sense April's nervousness. Can't wait to read more!

I figured I'd give this a read after Novus suggested it in the chatrooms over on SS, so thank him! lol

Wow, very bold of April! Lets see what Donnie thinks of her little advances. ;) Girls can be quite a tease. lol

Can't wait to read what happens next!

sweet and so fresh! I want to know what makes turtles tick, though. Give it up!

Short, but sweet. You write Donnie's thought processes very well!

This is one f the best April Donnie story I have read I can't wait for more

This is to be by far one of my favourite Donnie/April fanfics that I have stumbled across. I love how you explored the relationship between Donnie and April whilst both of them remaining in-character throughout the whole thing. Everything was so well written, the grammar was perfect and it was really descriptive. Beautiful work, I look forward to reading what you come up with next!

I really liked the new beginning piece that you added, Jay! Very nicely done! It also sets up everything else quite well, as it shows their longing for one another! I think it was a beautiful touch and I just thought I'd take a minute to say so!

Great Work!

Wonderful beautifully written story. Much enjoyed. The exploration into the characters and their 'reservations' in what the other felt was fantastic.

Thank you.

He was scared first, but then relaxed, no more fears. April really loves him.