Reviews for When Good Majors Go Bad |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good story! An alternate way for Burns to have gone crazy! I have to say, you had me thinking Radar was going to die. Happy ending, though ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know I probably shouldn't be laughing, but... HAHA! Frank in a rubber room, laughing hysterically! And I could picture everything, it was very in character. Like Margaret saying that Donald was romantic, Radar talking about Stinky... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought this was a very good story! I always thought there was more to Frank than just going crazy in Tokyo! |
![]() ![]() A good story, but your style is choppy and a little rushed. You don't describe a practical joke and a shooting in the same manner, and subtlety and tension is the key! |
![]() ![]() that was great! i loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol I loved that. A great way of explaining Frank’s feelings about margarets wedding. I especially like how you included all the members. Keep it up Radar fan. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was scary...no other word for it...except...scary...oh, and brilliant! YEAH! BRILLIANT! well done! This was rather interestingly great! take a lolly from the big jar |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cool! Kinda freaky, but cool. Great work! ~DM |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an interesting story! Don't you think, though, that the gang would have been a little more scared with a maniac on the loose trying to kill them? Nevertheless, awesome fic! jenben |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have never threatened to cry, then laughed so hard in my life! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I could definately picture this! After a while, it was like I wasn't reading it anymore, I was watching it in the back of my mind! Great jokes! Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good! I liked it, though it was a bit disturbing...lol on the end. |
![]() ![]() Very fun story, I enjoyed reading it. You should write more often. (send some of it to me) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the story. You got Hawkeye, BJ, and Franks charecters perfect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm confused. Most of the beginning of this story is an actual episode of M.A.S.H. Frank going nuts over Margaret marrying Penobscott is not an original idea. You just added stuff to someone elses story. You have good writing skills and hold the characterizations well, but you need to write your own story not use someone elses and just add details. |