Ooo loved this oneshot-I love me some angstyish-ness! Great writing! Professors can be so mean-yours sounded like s/he was just crazy! I feel like creative writing professors can be especially mean...oh well, go you and your drive to still do creative writing and for being awesome at it!

-Nicole

Good work :)

This is so sad and beautifully written. I know it was so hard to write, but I am also very glad you did write it...despite the sadness of it. I feel you captured Mary's internal anguish very well.

wow this took my breath away.
if only they had showed Mary more like this in show...

Thanks 4 this amazing fic, your writing is always so superb.

This is stunningly beautiful and heartwrenching. I needed this. Thank you so much.

You just know when watching 1x10 that Mary is compartmentalizing herself so she doesn't break into pieces. I'm glad you wrote a story of what's going on inside her head! So good and so heartbreaking.

Kate, that was lovely. Really. You know I disagree with her allowing herself a time of reflection like this, my little bento box. But it was beautifully written, nonetheless.