I really enjoyed this. Great story, great writing. I also liked you Ally character. :)

That wasn't a bad ending. Everyone was happy so, yeah.

I'm still going to wait for that long , intense, story about them. No matter how long it takes. But this one too is good. I wouldn't mind if u continue. I would want to see them try to have a relationship and hide it from guisippe right under his nose. I want to see how they would handle it when and if guisippe finds a bride for stefan. And I wouldn't mind a lovers fight where they would make up after. :). Your work is amazing.

Loved it.

I dnt lyk reading one shots becos they hardly make sense and have no plot lines. But this is different. There is so much potential wid this story I will read if u decide to continue.

You do write defan so well. You should write about them more often. Keep em coming.

MORE PLEASE!

Ah is it appropriate for me to yell update soon. I just want more.

You can't end there. This needs to be a full blown story. There is so much you can do with it now. Do it. ;). You are good.

Well I loved everything about the ending and this story. It needs to be continued. Tnx.

Wow, I really love this story. Ally is really cool, not at all out of place as some OCs are. Good idea with the brothel and Stefan's curiosity showing him more about himself than he expected. And the smut... yummy!

Firstly, I love you.. Secondly, can you please continue this plot?! Pretty pleaseeeeee?

I love Damon and Stefan exploring this side of their relationship.. It's very rear to find a great piece of writing.. I love how possessive Damon gets.. Okay! Now I'm off for a cold shower.. Bye!