wow this is a really sweet story!

These two are so cute and I love how John persisted until he could help Sherlock!

A good story

This was absolutely lovely. I wish this had been in the show.

Aww this is just well perfect! You kept Sherlock and John perfectly in character I can see this being in the show! Amazing!

Good writing! Amazing missing scenes! Hearbreaking... If only they were in the series...
I really wish you'll write the sequel! ;-)
Good luck and inspiration! ;-)

This whole story was so in character and warmed my heart. Thank you for writing and sharing!

I love this! Hope there's going to be more of it soon!

Very nice story. Very in character. However, I would suggest you get a beta-reader in the future to help you with typos, grammar, punctuation, etc. There were a lot of places where you used "your" instead of "you are," a lot of "an" instead of and, and a lot of miscellaneous problems like shits instead of shirt in Chapter 1. There are enough of those sorts of problems to detract from the quality of your writing. Again, I enjoyed the story, and it'd be nice to see it polished up.

That was really well done.

Please continue! I love it.

Hm…true, always wondered how Sherlock had gotten the couple to give him their motorcycle, but it's true…he gets what he wants. Will there be another one about when John and Mary find out about Sherlock being injured?

very nice!