Love the story also loved that their daughters name was snow white.

Sky

Yes you should add more I loved this

I love it all.

I like the song quote from evanescence. As always, super good.

Just wanted 2 say that though I don't often read stories with such short chapters, I'm extremely glad I read this one! You developed a great background story for not only Elsa and Jack, but Pitch as well! It was a nice change of pace to see him going after Elsa for some reason other then just her relationship with Jack. You did an awesome job and I thank you very much for such an enjoyable reading experience!

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG! UPDATE PLEASE ! OMG OMG OMG! IM HAVING A HEART ATTACK, IM GONNA DIE, GOODBYE WORLD!

more MORE MORE! (plz)

You definitely got my vote for a great chapter here. Very nice and decent.

i love this fic ! the story line is one of the most original that i have read
sorry for my bad english , have a great day !

This story is amazing! Keep up the updates please! :)

You are a goddess! This is amazing dear girl. Absolutely amazing.

i think i'm gonna cry

My nose is bleeding.

Steamy

amazing.