Cool story just reviewd now.

I'm kind of sad that pitch forgot jack. it was good though

the fuck was this ending? It's kinda completely... Whatthefuck?

Really good, I loved how he didn't end up with Pitch, OR the guardians, but the wolf pack! I really like stories where Jack's a wolf, or a shapeshifter, or part of a wolf pack!

I feel the ending could've been fine the way it is if there were more details and an explanation. But I'm glad you're rewriting it so we can see your significantly better writing. altho it wasn't too bad in the original. And I did like all your characters and the original idea. So yay! can't wait!

I loved the beginning, but I absolutely HATED your oc it ruined the whole story for me ... sorry I just had to say it.

I really liked this story, but I didn't like the ending.

Retra, meet Frosted!
Retra: ·looks at screen· Similar! XD
...you usually say same.
Retra: I have never played the knife game.
True. Probably. Yes, she is here.
Retra: I'm in your mind.
You're still here. XD

Yay! ·hugs my own wolf· This is Sadie! XD
Russet: ·holds up another wolf· And this is Fang!

ok I'm really confused right now but I'm hoping everything will be explained in the sequel...which I'm TOTALLY reading!

Please do Naruto fan fiction, i would love that !
:)

this is a cool story and very different. prefer your version ;)

P.S it's me :)

Total bs Manny u dipdoosh why you force jack to be something hes not. Im done. Was a good story but i cant do it anymote with that tutn of events. Krep writing

Wolves that can pick locks? Now I've seen everything!

Ooooooooooh snappity snap snap