Good chapter enjoyed it.

I just love Little Lance...I always find versions of his backstory interesting.

Great to see the update and I enjoyed it. Great to see Little Lance, his IQ is pretty brilliant.

Can't wait for more and to see little Lance at school. I also want to see what brings him to like psychology.

PLEASE UPDATE
Amy

Love this story. I'm a real Sweets girl and I love Sweets stories. It's so cute, I love reading about young Sweets. Please continue! Amy

Good story

This is a fun idea that you are doing. Very enjoyable so far. More please!

I. Just. died.
SHELBY FUCK YOU AND YOUR KENNY HES SO DAMN CUTE LIKE WHAT YES
A GENIUS YES FUCKING SHELBY WHY ARE YOU I GOT CHILLS MOTHER FUCKER, CHILLS. SIT DOWN AND STOP DOING THIS TO MY FEELINGS.
FIRST YOU ATTACK THEM WITH BARBED WIRE AND TOM AND NOW YOU WRAP THEM IN A FUZZY BLANKET OF CUTENESS. WHY YOU DO THIS. WHY YOU DO THIS?!

Love it so far thanks for the update...I feel so lucky.

I like the Lance, so cute!

More please! I love that Ben backs Liz instantly and doesn't question her. I think that provides for a sense in sweets to be a stand up guy of his own as he grows and emulates his parents behavior. Also great reference to sweets eyes, they are a huge part of him as they give everything away with every emotion.

I love you got the name, finleys. A lot of times people don't catch that and they use sweets though Gordon Gordon does list their name as finleys, you so smart! ;

NOOOOOOOOO! ! This was NOT pointless, not in my mind, it was a very big step, fo Sweets to bond with a man, amd short is not always bad, I don't like extremely long chapters personally, this was a very good chapter, I'm excited for the next one! Keep up the good work! :D

I really like this, you really should continue.

You. Are. Fucking brilliant. I know, we've been over this but again CHILLS! That was good, short yes, but good. In my most professional opinion I say that was totally hardcore (In a sweet, innocent way)

Chills, woman, you've given me . Is. Brilliant! You just must continue! I adore it.