Can you make more please this is good

I love this story! Please continue!

My prediction at the start of this chapter the start of it is a side of awesome

Interesting Danny awake to find out everything's been covered up why would they cover
it up to what to what end

Danny's right about one thing convincing jazz should not be that hard the portal right there
also given the circumstances of our be better if you tell jazz
she find out everything by other means to be a disaster

Danny's right an automatic unlock sequence for the portal that's a really bad idea

An interesting dilemma here the weird thing is Sam is actually playing the voice of reason
about how the ring should work or not for the jump in any decisions that should up more
information

Again Jack mentioned some pretty good concerns
I clock works lack of information is now explained the ring spirits and have to explain things
a course he could've told them that they need to hold the rings to talk to each other
Danny could've have buried the dam rings in the case of concrete due to that lack of information
which initially will work just as well as keeping the

Interesting twist but probably the best I've ever seen
having the ancients actually explain what the powers are. How many times in every powered up show to the
hero just get thrown in the deep end they expect just to learn how to do what they need to do
on the job. The still better than them knowing nothing, still they should gave them
tutorial how to activate the powers.

Maybe the thing they don't want to influence them from their experience help Danny company
learned their own ways of yielding the powers

I still wonder what have expansion Rangers, just to jazz Valerie and star still my votes
for expansion ally status

As for the dark ranger I vote for Paulina, I can easily see her joining team bad guy

We shall see

Whoa. Amazing!

Oooh! I like this one so far! :)

We definitely feel for Danielle beginning with the loss of her parents alike. Danny and jazz had each other and are able to deal with the less than attentive parents
that Danielle is alone and still have a hard for her

And then the other events if rest upon them

Walls completely surprising that Tucker is only one that is enjoys idea being superheroes. And the Sam's defense here. Most people go out of between 13 and 15 not 10

I value the fact that Danny wants a vote. When you talk about saving the world. If you don't do and your still in the world you have a choice. world will be lost and you'll be dead

See the problem is voting is unimportant. Decision whether or not he used the rings is responsibility is individual. For an example if Sam decides to do this or not her decision. Whatever Sam decides here. Her and only her answer. So whatever anyone else decides is nothing to do with her decision. And the same goes everyone else here

She is right why do they not given the rings to adults why to kids instead
I mean, and EMT a cop a firefighter hack wideout recruit a few soldiers would all be infinitely more qualified than a bunch of kids the power up and take care of business
only possible way adults could be used as may be there too hardheaded. Unwilling to change. Surgeon thinks the views to embrace the new reality

Its way too big of a task and no real evidence supporting anything they've been told actually happen. Of course, clockwork when he given them the rings given pretty much evidence as well In a way. You could say Sam is being stubborn the sake of being stubborn. Or, more likely he speaking out of fear believe she's being relatively honest

Of course they make it sound like the boat goes one way or the other. The losing side will be forced to do what the winning side wants. Given the rings of personalized what's keep one of them take the ring regardless of the vote outcome and go on their own

Also makes you wonder about Jack's sister here and I had to guess I'd better name is Ember and she's a rock star

Oh wow I totally missed that jazz wasn't with them to get a ring. I guess we would have a candidate for the six Ranger. Those unfamiliar Ranger more after the adduce the Rangers is usually up to three out on Rangers they show up later on with the twisted back story. All Rangers must joined up in one team before the big bad. They gets ass kicked

So my guesses are jazz Valerie star. Of course I'm going one I know conventional Ranger logic the writer might be going with something completely unique initial using different logic. But then mentioned otherwise I'll stick with you foundations I have
here

I guess a reluctant hero would say is called action. The ones that are attacking the world will sit around and wait for Danny to figure it out. So, come regardless. And that is what solves the argument between him and his friends when we use the rings. They will see firsthand the enemies of the world attack

Who is Danielle seen Danny and action with the ring doesn't really solve anything. She was already a believer. If Sam and Jake will need the lessons here
of course Danielle's little unrealistic of what was involved so maybe she needs education of what she has to really do

I guess we'll find out one way or another

We shall see

Not bad:)

I'm not sure I approve. Clockworks method of recruitment here

In one hand he made clear to them you've inherited this job as guardians. But your choice of whether you take it or not. But given the situation. They didn't take it into the massive consequences eyes and good beginning. Hundreds of millions of people to die or be killed

Also he didn't really give them any instructions on how to do the job?.
How could they carry it out, like training abilities etc.

The kind of left the figure it out if you will.
The only way I think this could work this out clockwork giving them time to think on the decision to dedicate themselves to it before he drops the details of how this will work on them

As for my prediction of the expanded Rangers? Star and Valerie

My prediction who deliberately join the bad guys, one way or another Paulina
and my prediction moron mess everything up for everybody dash and Mr. Lancer

I guess we'll find out

We shall see

Very interesting introduction to what characters here, he make Danielle and her friend. Part of the family. And well introduced

Also jazz has great growth be more rounded personality. She has for lack of better word a life in a way. It's not like she's just fussing over younger siblings and the library

I found the Messiah the lack of character growth. If you will almost clichéd with Danny's classmates. I mean, dash and Paulina, I could see playing the roles of those kind of a letdown seeing Valerie and star still being the a list morons

I know the counterpoint to our heroic teens but this is a bit over the top

Also the elephant in the room with Danny's parents missing how exactly him and jazz and Danielle stay in the home without someone noticing there's no parents around?

Also, no wonder the six Ranger will be?
For those unfamiliar with the term usually after the initial Rangers are introduced additional Rangers that show up and eventually joining the team. After going through a little story. I might be working for the bad guys and intentionally will have the own issues. We'll have and justify the means approach etc.
also have powers superior/equal the whole entire team. So when they join. Eventually they bring everyone up a level

We shall see

Yo man update please I really wanna know what happens I really enjoy this concept

I'd like to see what happens next but I sort of like Danny's catch phrase 'going ghost.' Can he still use it to summon his spirit? And will they turn into ghosts? Update soon!

Wow...this is really good. I know I'd definitely want to read more of this.

Let's be honest the will probably choose to use their powers only person who will probably not will be Danielle

Ooh. This just got interesting. Can't wait!

Great chapter, I'm so happy you updated, I've been waiting to read another chapter of this story! Hopefully they decide to except the power clockwork gave them immediately and not turn it down at first, because that just wouldn't be as fun now would it? Can't wait till the next chapter:)

-Zoxy