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Ava is (obviously) River & the Doctor's future daughter... Looking forward to her showing up again in your next story, especially if it's before she's born again.

Dr. Green and Dr. Carter. I see what you did there. (also, I really hope that was meant as a reference because if it wasn't, that is a ridiculously uncanny coincidence.)

I love this story

Plz plz plz make a sequel I would definitely read it and I have no doubt that I'll luv it just like I luv this one! So plz plz wright a sequel!

P. S. And yes that is my real name and no I didn't change it of anything that's the name I was born with and I started to like my name only after "the angels take Manhattan" cause it was rivers alias. And river is by far my most favorite character and alex kingston is my favorite actriss

Please do a fic about Ava

It's not bad, it's just a bit cheesy. They're relationship on the show, isn't constantly acting insecure and needing reassurance. And why is River sobbing all the time? That's very OC, she keeps things bottled up inside because that's how she was trained. I like the story on it's own, but characterization wise, it's not very in line with the show.

ERMAGHERD *dies* BEST ENDING EVER :D

Do me a favor: write about adventures they take Dayton on. Pweese I wanna see more of Dayton :3

Absoloutely amazing! You should definitely do another story.

Eremgee i loves this fanfiction! You are most certainly welcome :)

this is a very great story :) I Love it! :D

This is my favorite minisode of them! Im glad you did this! :)

love it so kind and sweet

AWWWWW Love love love it! :)