I would have liked to have read more about this fic.3

Good story! But it said To be continue. But this was published on 2014 where us the story complete?

Please do continue .I know it's been a long time but they deserve a proper end whether they end up together or not .Cause there's too much uncertainty about .

Yaaaaas! Continue please! There's not enough fics about these two! Continnnnnnuuuueeee!

I LOVE Lightning and Snow! Please make more chapters!

I love this! Even though I'm fine with the Snow x Serah pairing, but I can't help but feel that these two just have more chemistry overall! I would love to see a continuation of this.

Yes, this needs to be continued. Definitely.

Aww, this is cute bad mostly sad. But I like how you introduced lightning to us; snow peeving at her, hehe. Please write some more? Even if it's another unrelated one-shot, this was an enjoyable read. As always :)

This makes sense to me. I like the idea and would love to see this contin. I would love to read another lightning and snow if because there are hardly any and I love them. Please continue it, I would love to read more.

This is awesome! And even though I havent played "Lightning Returns" yet and havent finished XIII-2, do I love this! Its great and Id relly like a continue of this. Snow and Light were in my eyes actually the perfect couple and not Serah. I dont really hate Serah, but I dont love her as a character either. Lightning is just the best for me and Id really like to know if Snow and she get together in the end or if it will be impossibel for their feelings of responsibility and guilt? Anyway, Favo! :D

Great take on the story.

it would be awesome if you did continued, dont give it up!
please do continue.

that was great!
thank you so much for this fic :)

I like this alternate ending/continuation, this way you can continue the games' storylines!
Serah has had a whole game going through tough trials with a heavy burden along with Noel, so I don't know if she would be the type to force forgetting about what everyone's been through, but I like that you've noted the 500 years of torment Snow and Sazh had- that's bound to change someone, at least in some ways. I like how you've noted it and the bond that he and Lightning share seems very plausible, especially since it's building on the bond they already have. I think their interactions are IC: it would take a lot of development for a romantic relationship to happen between them but I think you've started in the right place, too many fanfics take the shortcut somewhere along the line.
Keep up with the references from the games and descriptions, it makes your story more lived-in and recognizeable from the games' universe.
I've really enjoyed it, I hope you keep up the good work and continue the story!

Eee, I didn't think my prompt I requested on tumblr would get published here as well. lol.

Anyway I always loved your style of writing. It always makes the pair seem possible, like, the pair isn't impossible. I mean after what they've been through them together is impossible. I have LR to thank for that. XD

If you do make this chaptered then I'll be looking forward to that, if not that's cool. Also I love how simple you've ended this. So cute.