Brilliant! :D You're just good at writing so I wouldn't resist although I do not like Elijah / Hayley. Let alone that you wrote it before the season start (which is amazing, there are many traces that seem to be stolen from you on the show), your characters are perfectly in character, Elijah even more than his current TV version. Love the clever and natural dialogue and the ending (aptly capturing her "no escape" situation). Thank you for sharing, it's always pleasure! :)