It was alright. My complaint though is the overly formal style. Without contractions it just doesn't flow well and it read pretty disjointed. Other than that good knowledge of character

LOVE! LOVE! LOVE! Yours is the first story I read of this fandom because I had finished the series just yesterday! I cannot wait for more! Very beautifully written:) are you planning on a sequel?
Cheers
CB

This is truly remarkable! I love it so much! Both the characters are spot-on! Great job!

love it love haylijah

amazing! please continue

Ahhhhhh! I'm pretty sure you just provided the first Elijah-Hayley lemon ever! Well done, I loved it