Damn! I wish you had written more because it certainly could be made into a full fledged story. But maybe it was a wise decision that you kept it as a one-shot because it becomes more exciting like this. You have to imagine the rest yourself which makes it even more interesting. Thanks for sharing this with us.

That is one sexy snake alright ;)
Poor Hermione, a good looking package doesn't always seem safe to touch *shrug

Thanks for sharing. I've read the continuation and I say that lives up to expectation.

Ooh. I like :3

I like the fact that he throws her off with his honesty.

Tori

I really like Ron and Hermione as couple but I just love seeing Draco and Hermione together. And I like reading about them having already something at Hogwarts and Hermione has feelings for him although he is a Death Eater.

Any chance of a sequel? This was awesome!

AWESOME!

Intrigued! It was very good. Just wish it was longer. A sequel maybe? ; )

Majorly love! It shows the possessive, dark, but attractive side of Draco. Would there be a sequel or an epilogue?

that. was. awesome!

This was good, it has the potential to more than a one-shot. This story line is something that I've been into recently. If anything else, I'd love to read a sequel!

Draco: You smartass. :)

OMG can you continue this? This needs to be more than a one-shot!

I loved this! Perfect one shot!

I liked it! Wish it was a bit longer though, at least a few more chapters, maybe each showing a future year or a flashback. Interesting story line though and good writing style! :)

Malfoy's behavior is abusive, not romantic, and is unlikely to ever be romantic if this is a pattern for him (ie, physically controlling to the point of violence/pain, socially isolating, violently jealous). Going through a war would only exacerbate and reinforce this pattern; it does not bode well for Granger if he survives. She'd be better off to obliviate him from behind.

If it were a one-off, not his normal behavior, and he realized that he had gone too far when she expressed pain, and asked to be forgiven immediately, it might almost be forgivable, depending on their relationship history. As the story stands, it's a classic abusive pattern. Not sure if that was your intent or not.