Heh.

Reading some of your older stuff. Love this. Miss Firefly.

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"Piece of shrapnel tore up that nerve (cluster) my first tour. Had it moved". AWESOME tie-in :)

Epic! This is one of those fics that makes me go 'why did no one think of this before?!' I would love to read more from you in this fandom you have a real talent for it!

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HAHA! This is something that River would certainly do. I love how she makes Mal uncomfortable by deliberately misunderstanding his "We should go to bed" comment, and the idea of her drawing on herself, naked, is priceless.

And yes, that spot sure is important. It certainly took the Operative by surprise!

Well done.

well that... was far weirder then i thought it was going to be... do we get to find out WHY its important?

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