A well desrved hell of his own creation. Nice. Not really... but you know... good stuff. Not really.

Listen... Buddy... Who said you could... Do that

I'm not crying...You're crying...
See children, this is why communication saves lives. Literally.

I don't see danny doing suicide, but damn! Great details! XD That had to sound bad... I'm lucky I caught the little change ya made in the last chapter, or I wouldn't have read that. If you're gonna make an epilog, ya should. Be cool to see Sam, Tucker, and Jazz's reaction to this. :)

...Whoa. I...I don't, I mean, great writing and all, but I prefer different topics. Suicide...doesn't sit well with me. Keep up the good work.

Liliana

the last two chapters are the same

Frightening in its intensity, and the clarity of the given details outlines just enough. You played with emotions successfully. I can't say for sure this will be reread, for I really don't wish to become saddened too often, but marvelously composed.

I am crying…suicide…I dont believe that his parents don't accept him let along cause him pain and grief….

I really like the way you wrote this, amazing!
Is there coming another chapter or is this really The End?

This was a really good story. The second version of the final chapter was very good.
Keep writing more stories.

*whispers "This is morbidly awesome! as me throws a chair off the window*

So, this is the end?

I can't breath, oh god. The feels are to much, just to much.

Wow. I'm speechless.
That was amazing writing. I don't even know what to say. Beautiful.
The suspicion was perfect, every description, the plot in general and right down to the details. Again, amazing. This is definitely a new favorite of mine!
And please do post the alternative chapter! I'd love to get more detail on those fateful moments with Danny. Great job!

please post it, you got me curious to what it would be like.