Reviews for Distant Dream |
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Guest chapter 20 . 3/19 This is the first time I cried while reading a. Fricking. FANFICTION. OMG |
Tayashia chapter 20 . 1/24/2018 Nooooo! Must read next one! This is such a beautiful story. It's well crafted and nicely executed. It read like a the novel with side plot adding up and leading to a beautiful finale. The author was able to capture emotions from rage to love. The characters entranced me into their world and wouldn't let go. If you are thinking about reading this, please be prepared for a journey. |
Tayashia chapter 19 . 1/24/2018 Endless amounts of crying! |
Tayashia chapter 15 . 1/23/2018 it saddens me, I'm getting to the end. I'm still in love with the writing and story and the characterization |
Tayashia chapter 7 . 1/23/2018 I have goose bumps! Finding out the English is not your first language, makes this story even more impressive. It also explains the tricky tense switches. This is amazing you've written and I am greatly enjoying it. |
Tayashia chapter 6 . 1/23/2018 I absolutely love your tid-bits of background knowledge of the culture. I mean I've been watching anime for years and I get the fine details of the reasoning behind some of the most common traditions in all animes it's rather interesting. |
Tayashia chapter 2 . 1/22/2018 Switching of the tenses is really bugging me, however the concept of the story makes it very easy to overlook and automatically correct my mind. The one thing I do suggest is reading your story out loud, this allows to catch the tense errors pretty easily. Again great story so far I'm really excited to see where it goes |
squirtlepokemon215 chapter 20 . 10/9/2017 AND THEN THERE'S THE TITLE REFERENCE HITTING ME STRAIGHT IN THE HEART |
zye1 chapter 20 . 8/9/2016 I hate Masami! Argh! The skies should have punished her! Love your story. Marking as a favorite so I can re read it. Thanks for writing this. |
CharlieBoneFan chapter 20 . 5/26/2015 OMG! I am freaking out. I hate Masami so much. |
normalfan chapter 1 . 10/30/2014 OMG! GOOD! I"M INLOVE! |
Lilyfromthewoods chapter 20 . 10/15/2014 What is the sequel called |
ili777 chapter 20 . 9/17/2014 This is an amazing story. Though I was disappointed with the ending, I do understand you need it to start your sequel (which I'm going to read right now). I loved the story all through it and am amazed by how well done the plot is. Also I like very much your OC characters (spirits and humans) as well as the fact the Yougoshi and Toushi haven't stopped watching over Chihiro, I believe Shirudo hasn't either. Well I can't wait to see what will happen next and I hope Chihiro will at least get back her memories, if not her powers too. Thank you for writing this . |
Led Floyd chapter 20 . 7/30/2014 Brilliant story. I shall now read the sequel! Keep it up! |
pie480 chapter 20 . 7/12/2014 This was great! There was a lot of drama and romance but not enough that it was boring and cliche. You have grammer, spelling, and punctuation problems here and there but not too many that it becomes super annoying. You also need to stick to the correct tense of time. In some places where you were supposed to use past you used present, stuff like that. Other than that, it was really good. It was kinda weird when you called No-Face by his Japanese name because I've only seen the English version. Also, when you introduce new yokai, it might be better to explain what they are in parentheses below it instead of putting it all at the top, because this way the readers don't have to constantly scroll up to see the explanation if they forget or for the readers that just skip that top portion because they think it's just the author making comments and thanking people for helping them. |