Thank you! I was kinda upset with the fact they never addressed all that, and not just cause I’m an angsty piece of trash. Very well done.

Love the stories please continue your Kingdom Comes story too.

Ahh the brotherhood. I love it need much more.

What a sweet and wonderful chapter. I love the father/son relationship. Beautiful.

One of my friends used this poem and drew *by hand* the scenes using Kaitou Kid characters. It took her almost a year off and on but she recently uploaded it to YouTube and if you love the poem, give her video a shot.

I think you need to work on Athos' character a bit more. He's usually the calm,( not saying he can't get angry) moody, stoic type and not the type to get so exasperated easily.

Excellent insight into that epic scene !

Awesome !

This chapter is absolutely gorgeous and heartbreaking! Outstanding, really, very good job! I can't wait for the next one, so far your collection is wonderful! Very good, I love the way you describe your characters, really, and even if I'm not fond of slash, I liked everything all the same :)

Love all of these! This last one was wonderful. Angst, but good angst.

Am catching up with these. Not reviewing each one but wanted to leave a comment to this chapter (16) - one of my faves so far.

Just found these - they're great! Will review properly when I get to the end but wanted to let you know I'm really enjoying them.

Poor Athos... he would be doubly grieved, since this is the last chapter.

There are so many stories featuring the 4,.. it's nice to see one that includes Treville so much.

Love is patient, love is kind... can't go wrong with scripture.