Reviews for Tomorrow's Romance Dawn (OLD VERSION)
Aarik Wrath chapter 15 . 3/12
I know this is the old version, and also that this story seems deader than a door nail, but it has since been revealed that New World Brook can, in fact, cut steel.

Can't really blame you for not being psychic though.
rainmegumi chapter 27 . 4/2/2019
it's hard to image the situation,, u always change the scene
AstarothOrigin chapter 20 . 3/20/2019
I kinda wanna say how bullshit op your OCs are, their powers are op but have little in imagination. Don't know, your OCs just irritate me, they are quirky but aren't fun to read.
AstarothOrigin chapter 1 . 3/18/2019
I like your story, I just don't like your OCs, they take the spotlight and are irritating in my eyes, I usually skip them and I'm kind of ticked off that the future Straw Hats are weaker than them, this shouldn't be a fanfiction but instead a spinoff of your OCs because while you do flesh them they are the least enjoyable aspect of this work, until they get their assess handed to them.
CureCaligraphy chapter 18 . 2/11/2019
Lyso... oh for the love of god the German names will never leave me will they
Chrisfragger chapter 20 . 2/8/2019
No (Future)Luffy yet... I'm getting bored.
Chrisfragger chapter 17 . 2/7/2019
Where the HELL is (Future)Luffy already? Does he even exist in this story? 17 chapters and not a whiff of him yet?
King of Fans chapter 7 . 11/23/2018
I can't wait for the next chapter.
King of Fans chapter 6 . 11/23/2018
Good chapter

Zoro has a point. Some of the strongest of the futcher crew can take out the past strew hats in one go. Heck I willing to bet future Nami, or ussop are stronger than past luffy, and zoro.
Guest chapter 26 . 11/17/2018
But I was hoping for more on the other site but you’ve only got to chapter five ToT
I get it tho life gets in the way of some things
Guest chapter 27 . 11/17/2018
Hot diggity! This story is so good!
VinsmokePhoenix chapter 24 . 11/15/2018
This fic is so good! There’re so many well thought out details and intricacies that make this a great read! Also when I read about Siobhan finding a top hat with goggles I was immediately like “?!SABO?!”
Guest chapter 8 . 7/14/2018
I'm disappointed in you
You should have used "GOD" Usopp
Guest chapter 26 . 6/28/2018
This is great, all of the detail that you put into this story is amazing. Screw the haters, this is one the best fanfics I have ever read.
a7152966 chapter 2 . 6/3/2018
I just never really realized that until Robin, the Strawhats are a crew of teenagers. wow
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