I love this fic I hope u can update soon can't wait to see what happens next

I don't understand why this doesn't have more reviews. Your writing is phenomenal

This is so good! I'm pretty sure I read this a few months ago, really glad I found it again. Please won't you continue?! You're killing me leaving it here.

OH NO ACEEEEE

Please please please update soon this is the best acexsabo fanfic I have read so far...I cant wait for the next chapter:)

You can’t believe how excited I got when I received notification that you updated this story! Thank you so much! And I had to read the new chapter right away of course! /

As always your writing style is a joy to read, it describes everything so accurately, the reader can picture perfectly what’s going on and knows how the characters feel. Reading about Ace tormenting himself was so painful and still trying desperately to hide everything from Sabo and Luffy…so tragic. ;_; But when you described how he had an idea that Luffy was onto him, staying around more often and looking at him with worry…it’s just something people will do if you don’t talk but they notice something about you has changed. It was perfect and I really liked it.

And of course then there’s Sabo… I’m glad he’s onto Ace now, but that last part… ;_; How he holds Ace in his arms and realises what he’s been hiding… I am so looking forward to the next chapter and how Sabo is going to handle all of it. But I know the moment it’s out in the open (whenever that is) and there are no more secrets between them I’m probably going to cry my eyes out… Thanks so much for writing such a wonderful piece! :)

Will there be more?

I don't know what to say. I already feel like crying my eyes out and this is not even the end... This story is really moving and so tragic and so wonderful.

When Sabo kissed Ace and then told him about his feelings, I actually stared at my screen for a while and then I had to re-read the whole scene just to make sure I got every tiny bit of these feelings! I loved it so much because it wasn't your average kiss/confession situation and it really fit in perfectly.

And that chapter now, Sabo watching over Ace and being worried... And Ace torn between telling him the truth. It's just so intense and this chapter was so nice to read! I really liked it!

I just love this whole story and if you ever decide to continue it, I'd be so so happy! Although I'll probably cry while reading it from now on because argh... The feels... Anyways, thanks for writing it! :)

oh. OH. Oh. oh. I’m. sad. Oh.
it was a really great chapter. Like I-want-to-cry great. I loved everything. Ace trying to keep it from sabo, ace thinking about if he should tell sabo he loves him or not, sabo hugging ace while worrying, PHYSICAL CONTACT oh god yes I love that, more worrying sabo and just ace not telling him even now. I’m just sad. This fic kills me. Like oh no. AND ACE NUZZLING CLOSER to sabo ahhh
I love there are many cute moments between them but there is angst and death and everything. Ahhh. I just loved it so much thank you for writing it.

and IT HAPPENED OH I’m so happy I have one more chapter and like good? So good? So awesome? I loved every bit of it, ace asking how long sabo loved him and sabo is like a while ok damn I just that was great. and sabo telling him ‘I love you’ and just ace hearing his heartbeat that was so cute ahhh and then OKAY that was great? oh god.

‘I’ve always wanted to try kissing you’ PLEASE DO THAT SABO. OH please. AND SABO SAYING HE GOT PLENTY OF TIME oh my heart poor sabo for not knowing what’s going on I love it so much THE ANGST. It’s gonna hurt him so much when he realise what’s going on. And ace being mad about the money ahhh yes I can see it why god, I love when ace is ranting.
AND SABO IS KISSING HIM OH GOD THIS IS A REALLY GOD CHAPTER and not just because of the kissing (but yeah I liked that too)

this chapter. Ahhh. Bittersweet yes. Ace asking that question from people. But it was really good chapter. I loved when he talked with thatch and just “I’m still figuring out” like ace please ahhh I don’t think thatch will think that ace is sick ahhh I just nooo.
AND THEN ACE IN THE RAIN ahh I love that too. And sabo coming and just worrying “how long have you been standing there?” I’m in love with these two god. And just sabo throwing a blanket to his face AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH soooo good! And when he was looking at sabo ooooooohhh that was really nice LIKE I LOVE THAT MOMENT THE MOST FORM THIS CHAPTER and telling him that ‘ I don’t hate you’ uhhh that was really great. Everything was great.

That fight between sabo and ace was bad… oh. But sabo going in his room and looking out for ace while he’s sleeping. Niiiiice. Oh god and sabo touching ace’s hair and playing with it OH oh really adorable. And cute. And then finally THEY TALKED KJAFSLKFJ SO NICE
Ace keeping it secret… I understand. But ughUGH. AND JUST THE LAST SENTENCE “Funny, he would have preferred the silence. Anything was better than a lie.”
I JUST ! I love how sabo knows when ace is lying even if he was away for a long time but he knows when he is lying and the way he can read ace or just read each other? Ahhhh SO PERFECT AND GOOD.
4 more chapters to go. oh god. no.

I'M CRYING NOOOOOOOOOO AAAAAAAACE OH GOD no no no. i just. no. is this enough for a review? because OH NO.
okay feelings aside -sobs- luffy and ace's conversation was great i just love the way you write their relationship? and when they talked about sabo ahhhh poor sabo thinking that ace hates him i'm !
there are so many emotions in the fic and i know i'm repeating myself but it's great. i love it.
and when ace was coughing in the beginning and there was blood on his hand and he laughed and just that was really great.

Sabo’s pov - screams- yes. So much yes. I can imagine sabo being terrified when he read the message first time bc it was ace and ace was in hospital and he didn’t want that.
Sabo looking at what could have caused it… and when he was happy when ace kept his stuff, and just thinking. Oh and the sabo grabbing ace part and throwing him onto the couch and ace hitting him. Perfect. This fic is so good