Interesting story with decent grammar, there are a few missing words from time to time, however there are quite a few MAJOR inconsistencies. Naruto is born during the time period that Mikoto, Minato, and Fugaku are all alive. The problem is you keep adding ninja like the Demon brother and Zabuza who haven’t claimed their fame on top of that Zabuza would have never met Haku yet. I like the story but the inconsistent things are a bit to much.

Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon

Wow. Just wow. This is by far the shitiest lame utter crap pathetic story I've ever read. Please delete this ridiculous bullshit.

The bold text is confusing me

Dude if you ever return to this story, don't update it yet. Fix your grammatical errors and the missing words.

Update soon

Good story keep it up and UPDATE SOON

Story is nice so far but I feel that you are making Naruto too powerful too soon.

ehhh i like everything exept that tsunade is the new orochimaru as long as you dont have her doing inhuman experiments

hmm, could be interesting

i've read some bad stories and this has to hit my top 1/3. he has gained way to much power way to quick to make a compelling story, and the way you phrase things is really bad i feel as tho i'm reading 6th grade writing. need to work on that.

I think you are missing two important points in your story like the fact Naruto 's team went with him on his mission to each of the villages and that I thought that Itachi was interested in Ayame or who ever you would have named the daughter of the ramen chef.

Well this is really interesting so keep up the good work and update soon.

Great chapter keep up the good work

it thanks for update