Sweet story! And I mean sweet as in romantic and touching.

Very nice best use of the yule ball yet

I like this chapter so much.

I really like how Harry Hermione come together and how Harry choose to really act for himself and not like a robotic tool to serve others.

Why do Ron expect making him happy is a valid reason to break up two mutual true lovers so that he can "get the girl" who would be forced from her real love? I thought the Gryffindores are supposed to be against sex slaves.

So I really enjoy how Harry rightly stood up for them and defend him.

I also really like how Harry don't care about Ron that much anymore and choose to rescue his GIRLFRIEND instead of doing as others want him to like a good little tool.

This chapter has so much realistic instead of arbitrary stupidity that I really find myself liking it.

I also really like the confrontation about why he rescues Hermione instead of Ron to Dumbledore-I like to see how Dumbledore evil plan to use Harry falls part. I like to see the likely evil manipulative Dumbledore fail, and the pureblood bigots either change or suffer pain.

I really look forward to reading the next chapter.

Wow, that was unexpected. Fun, though.

This is turning out really interesting. I love how you had Ron be the portkey and not the trophy.

nice chapter

awesome start

excellent update

Great post
Until next time
Gloria

Very cute so far, I want to see where this leads

Very good start
Until next time
Gloria

excellent start to your story

I like this story so much.

The way you wrote the characters are good. The interaction between the "bad Ron" and Harry and the way Harry defended her is nice and realistic. The way Hermione responded when she over heard Harry is very good.

I look forward to reading more.

Great start! Hope you update soon. :)

Well, that is what he should have been thinking. I thought it was rather gracious of parvarti.