I'm sure I am not the only one who had a strong visual at that last paragraph. I could totally see Jackson smile and nod to Jethro. Priceless! and Thanks.

I loved this whole story and the other stories of yours that I have read. I was wondering about updates of unfinished stories. Are your stories posted anywhere else?

Wow what a great story I really enjoyed reading it.

loved it...no other words to say

I enjoy reading this story. I thought it was fantastic.

I enjoy this thought it was good great job on it.

Very good I enjoyed reading this a lot great work.

This was great I enjoy reading it I hope you plan a squeal to this.

I was up until 2AM reading this story. Thanks so much. I love Gibbs and Tim together. It was a little hard for me since my own father passed away 2 weeks ago at age 88. But it was great.

Well this was really great.

I did enjoy reading this story great job on it.

Oh very god I enjoy reading it glad to see Tony and Abby came around.

Brilliant. I really, really loved this. A masterpiece. Thank you so much. Am always on the lookout for your work.

Well, my friend, I'm happy that you managed to complete this story.. I was quite frustrated not to be able to read an ending when I first found this, but I understand that you also have RL responsibilities.. This was a bittersweet one, and I'm glad that for once I'm glad not to read about life threatening situations-except for McGee.. We are now in May 2015 and I hope that you'll finish Catalyst and Laboring to Love very soon.. Catalyst seemed to be approaching to it's ending but I feel that Laboring has still some road to go.. I'm very curious how you're planning Tim to have his baby.. Take care and please don't forget those too ! :) Hugs for your family...

Well, you surely are portraying an Abby close to the character of the show.. She is always jealous, noisy and acts like a spoiled child.. Right now I am also reading a McAbby fanfic (much to my distaste) but there the author describes a completely different Abby, full of love and compassionate towards McGee, so unlike the Abby of the show ! I am glad though that you are writing a Tony more mature, someone who understands his mistakes because that's not what we saw through the years on the show..