Beautiful story!

I am so delighted to have discovered your writing this morning! You do such justice to the characters and I absolutely love the small details you include - her hands clawing at the back of his shirt, for example - that give such an intricate view of the moment.

Congratulations, you beautiful, beautiful author. You have fixed the Phantom of the Opera perfectly. I LOVED this- it was incredibly moving. The best part- "You came to me when it got you nothing and let me go when it costed you everything." Whoa. I got a bit misty there. Thank you for sharing such a brilliant piece.

I liked your characterizations and the feeling of unreality

Amazing works as it is usual with every one of your's stories. Again you've succeeded in creating haunting atmosphere and yet the story is still somewhat sweet, and the closer reader draws to the end, the bigger grows a silly smile on his face. The story starts as rather depressing but then slowly, but not too slowly, so it doesn't become boring, it evolves. And as a bud blooms into a flower, so does the tiny strand of hope in your story and in the end is the dominant one. Great work, though some of your other works I will still prefer to this, as they seemed a bit more realistic to me. I wish I could write in such a way as you do, however.

Great!

Aww, it's so sweet that Christine went back to Erik. Your writing is superb :)

Beautiful. That's all I can say because I am just blown away by your writing!

OMG this is awesome ;-)
Please please let there be more to come ;-)
Please don't leave it there ;-)
Cheers Dt

I just love your stories and this one is no difference. No wonder you are one of my favorite writers. You really capture the emotions between Erik and Christine. It's always so touching and moving without all the high drama or conflicts. I can't wait for the next one or another chapter for this one. :-)

Wow, this one complete chapter blew away LND. This was so well written with the passion in these two characters that is expected of them, it was beautiful. I am off to read anything more from you, keep them coming. Thank you

Now that, was an AMAZING one-shot. Please continue!

aww, this piece was very sweet. And very gracious of Raoul to understand she needed her angel and not him. Great work as always.

This was beautifully written, as usual! I loved how you described Christine's uncertainty and her sheer numbness in the aftermath of the fire and their reunion was perfectly described too, with all their uncertainty and the sense that they physically needed each other. You managed to make a simple hug seem so powerful!
It seems that Erik has a more realistic view of their future however, and he knows that his past deeds can't be simply swept under the carpet and they will always bother him to some extent. Good observations.
I was wondering what Madame Giry and, more importantly, Raoul, thought of it all though.. Presumably Christine said goodbye to him before she went back to Erik but it would have been interesting to see his reaction!

i think im going to love this one. good intro that brings you right into the story