Very good job THANKs

Okay so was Bentham tallying his kills or repenting for them? I love the story. Very unconventional. Kinda giving me anxiety because I can't read it fast enough to satisfy my curiosity. It's great.

Phew, this was an incredible story to read and experience. "To live is to choose hope" I'm going to write that on an index card and hang it up. I'm glad that JJ and Crow were able to go outside, considering how long they were kept in the dark and in confined spaces.

Oh no! Poor JJ. I hope that eventually finds a way to forgive herself and learns to heal. I am enjoying this story.

I am not exactly following. When was JJ taken and how does the team think this case might lead to her being found

Oh my gosh! This was amazing! Going to read the sequel right now!

I love this story. It kept me enthralled. It is very original while still keeping the integrity of the show and characters intact. I also am so glad to see the next one up. I am so looking forward to seeing the old JJ merge with the new JJ.

So i just spent the last... 3? nights reading this fic (after reading the first few chapters of the sequel because why not lol) and you're a phenomenal writer. I don't even like fics longer than about 20 chapters - i get bored like omg quit dragging it out already - but it was SO good and your chapters are just the right length for me to not want to stab myself in the eye.

Anyway, i think i love you and we should probably marry.

Hi! I just stumbled upon this story and I honestly read the whole thing in less than 2 days. It was such a well written story! I am anxiously looking forward to the next one! xx

Sweet ! Thanks for the 411... heading to the next one NOW :)

YAAAAAY

When is the sequel to this bc ohmygod i am dying! pls tell me Crow and Jay get together and live a majorly dysfunctional happily ever after! Its weird because i usually hate oc's with a passion but Crow is amazing and i just want to see him and Jay happy together, i absolutely adore this and you are officially my new favourite person! :-))

I just stayed up till 1 am reading this whole thing. Normally I don't read fanfics cause they never felt realistic to me but this was almost like reading the script of a Criminal Minds episode. The way you captured the characters' personalities is amazing and I held my breath the whole time. I've been stuck in bed sick for a bit and this was totally the highlight of my week. Thanks!

I just discovered your story about a week ago and I just finished it! Incredible work! You are so talented! I can't wait for the second half, brilliant job!

I started this story 3 days ago and just finished it. It was damn amazing! You're incredible. I'm excited about the next half of the story. I really can't tell you how great this was, I just can't explain it. Just... awesome.