Is this story abandoned

Great story

liar

check this chapter over for your shitty grammar mistakes and the other chapters

Make the chapters longer you cunt

Very rushed and poorly written sorry

More chapters plz

I'm sorry I tried to finish this and like it but I can't even finish the second chapter. First off I hope English isn't your first language because there were an amazing amount of spelling and grammatical errors, and if English isn't your first language you should have just wrote it in your native tongue. However I was able to overlook those errors but I simply could not overlook your changes to the base story. I gave up the moment you said Minato was half Uchiha.

I might go insane with out updates

i will kick dragon master 999's ass

Great concept for a story, but you should have someone proofread it before uploading. Lot's of simple errors.

losing your internet and your laptop deleting your storys sucks

if you don't like my stories then don't read them people and stop writing me and telling me go kill myself or go shoot myself or jump off the fucking bridge because I will report you and add you on my next chapter to let people know about you guys.!?

If he was beaten then shouldn't he be less trusting.

this is good