I really liked this story. It kind of showed me a whole new side to Oliver that I don't see in many of the fan-fictions. I really liked it. I don't think it needs any more work. I particularly enjoyed the little breaks about Felicity dating life. Although they aren't correct they did make a good break. Good job!

Sweet.

aww i loved this x

Love this story! Their dynamic is so sweet and caring. I wish more romance stories (even one-shots) showed relationships in such a cute, positive light like this

What a beautiful story, thank you so much for writing it! I think that it really captures the essence of the Oliver/Felicity appeal.

In all my ruminations about these characters, I've never considered Felicity as a virgin, but it worked in this story, because you didn't make the fact that she hadn't had sex before due to awkwardness, ideals that really don't fit her character, or social ineptness. It just... happened. Like it snuck up on her. I do think it was a good thing that Oliver learned this about her AFTER they had already started dating, after he realized and admitted his feelings for her, because this is something that I think could have scared him away if he had known beforehand. But I wasn't surprised by his reaction, by his need to take things slow with her, because it was Felicity. In a way, it'll almost be his first time, too, because, when it happens, it'll be for the right reasons, and what he feels for Felicity is different than anything he's felt with anyone before her. Oliver's loved before, but there are different kinds of love, and that just goes back to how he's treating making love with her differently.

Also, I really appreciated their banter. Maybe they didn't have sex in this story, but you certainly gave us plenty of foreplay. ;-)

Thanks for sharing,
Charlynn

AWWWWWW very cute!

That was fabulous! I really enjoyed it!

This was so cute. The ending was so sweet!

That was beautiful! If only...

That was unexpected hahaha but really good and cute !
Although I think you should write how it would be, their first time, what ya think !?

#Brazil

Love this.

isto foi tão bonito continue

it is beautiful! truly!

Absolutely beautifully written. Good job! (I did wish for a sex scene, but I understand why it wasn't there.)
xo Laura