You're really not going to continue this story CG? You've got me hooked to read this.

Interesting. Very Interesting Start. Having Finished the Luminous Arc 2 Game and a Huge Fan of the Fate Series, this is something i never really expected considering the low amount of stories within the Luminous Arc Archives.

I really found nothing bad in this crossover. The Characters acted like what they would act in the situation which was a major thumbs up to you and the how Shirou was placed within the setting was certainly unique. Carries a lot of potential and already has that strong grip that caught my attention the moment i began to read the story. Good Setting, Good Character Interaction, No Grammar Errors and is very much easy to read without getting confused.

A Very interesting story. I will be keeping my eyes on this story and you, the author yourself.

PS. Please do not let this go, like i said, it has incredible potential even for just simply reading one chapter alone.

This is looks really good! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Interesting, can't wait for the Boy with a body of swords meet the Witch of Flames heh, wonder if Fatima will be interested in him too?

Played Luminous Arc 2 but that has been a long time ago and was sad that 3 wouldn't come over... curses and it was supposed the best of the series.

How will you have the characters of Luminous Arc 2 act toward Shirou's behavior? Aka saving people while nearly getting killed?

This is really good! I'm definitely keeping an eye on this and putting it on fav. Keep up the good work man! :)

Interesting take on the crossover, hope to see where you take this.
I noticed you based it off a (possible) Heaven's Feel Bad End. Much Sadness.
You used a mixed version of the UBW Aria, it's neither completely Archer's nor Shirou's, any particular reason for that?
Anyway, make sure to pester your Beta reader, there were quite a few spelling errors.
Keep up the good work!

It's a really good first impression for your fic. Not only is the plot interesting, you managed to make me "feel" the story and easily folow through it despite not being familiar with the other series. From your hints, I take it that this Shirou is from the Fate route, right? It's nice to see a Fate one once in a while, as not many authors hold the route in high enough regards, and Fate Shirou is usually considered the least baddass among the three route. I personally disagree with that, as he would have the most likely chance to become a genuine hero compared to others due to Saber's inspiration and his promise with her. Sr for the long rant. Anyway good luck and godspeed with your fic. I'll be eaderly waiting for the next chapter!

after doing some research on this, i do look forward to reading more.

Oh be still my beating heart... can it be? A Luminous Arc crossover with Fate? YES, YES IT CAN.

...I kinda like the idea but hate the usual move that kills every loved one protagonist have. Also the phrase save one but ten died and so on is so wrong I don't get it. NO I do get the meaning but shouldn't it be in reverse. His goal not to kill people but to save them so he tries to save as many as he can...

Man this brings back memories of the 2 LA games. Damn shame they didn't do a english release for the third one.

This certainly was out of blue...
Anyway your work is good, Everything is good (ideas, etc.).
Hope this keep on updating.
Many good ideas die young... Hope your story wouldn't.
And lastly hope your fight scene will be good if not better than good.

I hope that this will continue not after the first few chapter,a lot of story that have promising potential always ended up abandon from some reason.

I will look forward to the next chapter.

Luminous Arc 2, eh? It's been a while since I heard it and I applaud you for writing this story. Looks really promising and worth reading. I'll be keeping an eye on this one. Now that I think of it, Shirou and Althea are almost the same. One wants to be a hero and the other wants to be a Mage Queen. It's all their only purpose. Wow, scary coincidence.