What happened next? I love it, but cliffhanger is a big no no... I cried a little

so sad yet so amazing

This was briliant! I cried ;-;

I just wanted to let you know that I cried reading this...and this is my third time reading it. It is beautifully and poetically written, which I was pleasantly surprised. This story is, by far, my favorite story that I have read on here. :)

You just shattered my heart! And now I have to go clean the tears off my laptop.

Other than that, your writing is beautiful!

O wow, fitting n awesome quote in the end.

I really like your habit of attaching a song to a story. :) Good job! PS: chronology was a bit confusing.

I think my soul just died... what the heck, Loki?! I'm going to slap you so hard your silver tongue will implode!

I found this just amazing :')
The chronology confused me a bit but still just beautiful :')

Oh, I cried. Poor Loki, Poor Princess Idunn.

i got lost... but i get the jist... i think

This was great, human is my favorite song right now, and i love fitzgerald, awesome

Beautifully written!

Dang, this is even better than what you let me read. Well done milady, well done indeed. *thumbs up*

FINALLY! :D